Today, I was home sick, so I read, and almost finished, A WRINKLE IN TIME. In this post, I'm going to talk about some excerpts from the novel that I found most interesting.
Excerpt one: Without warning, coming as a complete and unexpected shock, she felt a pressure she had never imagined, as though she were being completely flattened out by an enormous steam roller. This was far worse than the nothingness had been; while she was nothing there was no need to breathe, but now her lungs were squeezed together so that although she was dying for want of air there was no way for her lungs to expand and contract, to take in the air that she must have to stay alive. This was completely different from the thinning of atmosphere when they flew up the mountain and she had had to put the flowers to her face tobreathe. She tried to gasp, but a paper doll can't gasp. She thought she was trying to think, but her flattened-out mind was as unable to function as her lungs; her thoughts were squashed along with the rest of her. Her heart tried to beat; it gave a knifelike, sidewise movement, but it could not expand.
It is interesting to me to think about a human, three-dimensional body being transported into a two-dimensional world. A person's lungs wouldn't be able to expand and contract. In other words, they wouldn't be able to breath. The person's blood vessels would be flattened like a pancake, and I doubt blood could flow like that. Average movement, muscle control, and thinking in general would be out of the question, unless the brain still works flat? When I think of 2-D, I think of cartoons or video games, and though I think it'd be fun to be a cartoon character, I think it'd be even better to be able to breath.
Excerpt 2: "Now, don't be frightened, loves," Mrs. Whatsit said. Her plump little body began to shimmer, to quiver, to shift. The wild colors of her clothes became muted, whitened. The pudding-bag shape stretched, lengthened, merged. And suddenly before the children was a creature more beautiful than any Meg had even imagined, and the beauty lay in far more than the outward description
I think that most of the concepts in A WRINKLE IN TIME are hard to explain visually. In my opinion, this excerpt is the one in the book that is the easiest to picture. Some parts of the novel are kind of overly descriptive, and some parts aren't descriptive enough. I think this part is the perfect mix, simply because it is a mixture of description of the scene visually along with what is happening in general.